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PostSubject: Updated! Curious George Icon [WIP] March 12th 2009, 6:57 pm

Comment away... tell me what's good, and bad, and suggestions on how to improve. Be harsh... i don't mind.




Click on the preview to see in full size.

This is my updated latest attempt. Tell me is this is better, and give me some constructive criticism by commenting... thank you.



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PostSubject: Re: Updated! Curious George Icon [WIP] March 12th 2009, 8:07 pm

it looks nice smile just a little more detail would be nice
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PostSubject: Re: Updated! Curious George Icon [WIP] March 12th 2009, 8:09 pm

alxmarcond wrote:
it looks nice smile just a little more detail would be nice

thnks ... what kind of detail?
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PostSubject: Re: Updated! Curious George Icon [WIP] March 12th 2009, 8:12 pm

im not sure but right now it just looks so plain. i dont think you would see it on a dock. maybe add some personality to him. some shadowing (light shadowing tho please)
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PostSubject: Re: Updated! Curious George Icon [WIP] March 12th 2009, 8:17 pm

alxmarcond wrote:
im not sure but right now it just looks so plain. i dont think you would see it on a dock. maybe add some personality to him. some shadowing (light shadowing tho please)

oo, ok, and as far as the detail goes... i was planning to make versions of this guy. For example with glasses, hat, different expressions and so on. This is just the base.
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PostSubject: Re: Updated! Curious George Icon [WIP] March 12th 2009, 8:28 pm

ah okay then this is perfect wink move along to the release happy
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PostSubject: Re: Updated! Curious George Icon [WIP] March 12th 2009, 8:42 pm

alxmarcond wrote:
ah okay then this is perfect wink move along to the release happy

hope so wink
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PostSubject: Re: Updated! Curious George Icon [WIP] March 12th 2009, 9:16 pm

its seems really white washed out, like a glowiness is washing out any detail. its super cute, otherwise.
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PostSubject: Re: Updated! Curious George Icon [WIP] March 12th 2009, 9:25 pm

StupidGirl wrote:
its seems really white washed out, like a glowiness is washing out any detail. its super cute, otherwise.

thnks, and ye. theres way too much glow... ill reduce that.
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PostSubject: Re: Updated! Curious George Icon [WIP] March 13th 2009, 12:50 pm

Great work! add some shadows inside his ears and also down his mouth. and make it more rounded by adding shadows and lights
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PostSubject: Re: Updated! Curious George Icon [WIP] March 13th 2009, 3:51 pm

try to create more depth it looks flat
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PostSubject: Re: Updated! Curious George Icon [WIP] March 13th 2009, 3:52 pm

sure, for the release i will do that, but ill release an update by tonight!
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PostSubject: Re: Updated! Curious George Icon [WIP] March 13th 2009, 9:34 pm

Slightly too much glow, other than that, great!
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PostSubject: Re: Updated! Curious George Icon [WIP] March 13th 2009, 9:40 pm

im about to release my latest attempt in a couple of minutes, and btw, thnks sbux
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PostSubject: Re: Updated! Curious George Icon [WIP] March 13th 2009, 10:38 pm

im not sure that the drop shadow coming down from the white of his eyes is the best idea :/ makes it look a little weird.
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PostSubject: Re: Updated! Curious George Icon [WIP] March 13th 2009, 10:44 pm

alxmarcond wrote:
im not sure that the drop shadow coming down from the white of his eyes is the best idea :/ makes it look a little weird.

Oops, i was just experimenting and I accidentally left the drop shadow. Anyways, does the overall icon have some more depth; Does it look any better?
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PostSubject: Re: Updated! Curious George Icon [WIP] March 14th 2009, 1:25 am

it looks much better. more personality like i said before smile nice work
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PostSubject: Re: Updated! Curious George Icon [WIP] March 14th 2009, 10:20 am

alxmarcond wrote:
it looks much better. more personality like i said before smile nice work

thnks alex!
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PostSubject: Re: Updated! Curious George Icon [WIP] March 14th 2009, 10:43 am

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PostSubject: Re: Updated! Curious George Icon [WIP] March 14th 2009, 3:05 pm

For hair try to find hair brushes on deviantart it may help.. but please include the one in the preview withought any changes in the zip file.

Oh and also try to make mouth darker.. if you put this on dock it wont look so good.
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PostSubject: Re: Updated! Curious George Icon [WIP] March 14th 2009, 3:08 pm

h i s o k a wrote:
For hair try to find hair brushes on deviantart it may help.. but please include the one in the preview withought any changes in the zip file.

Oh and also try to make mouth darker.. if you put this on dock it wont look so good.

ye, its hard to see the mouth when it on the dock. Im working on it. Do you know how i can make it darker, without ruining the flow?
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PostSubject: Re: Updated! Curious George Icon [WIP] March 14th 2009, 3:10 pm

If you can just draw it again in black and then change the opacity to get what you want...
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PostSubject: Re: Updated! Curious George Icon [WIP] March 14th 2009, 3:26 pm

Nav dont forget to add shadows to the icon to make it look like it is sitting on a dock wink

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PostSubject: Re: Updated! Curious George Icon [WIP] March 14th 2009, 3:29 pm

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Nav dont forget to ass shadows to the icon to make it look like it is sitting on a dock wink

It's "add" not "ass" worried
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PostSubject: Re: Updated! Curious George Icon [WIP] March 14th 2009, 3:30 pm

h i s o k a wrote:
ja2pc wrote:
Nav dont forget to ass shadows to the icon to make it look like it is sitting on a dock wink

It's "add" not "ass" worried

Snap* typo...fixed* happy
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